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Innate People
02.10.06 (10:57 pm)   [edit]

innate people

i have waded through the ancient nile
and driven north to the end of roads.
why She asked and i told
her about it in a letter.

not everything
is a beginning, i write.
worlds wrap their way around
the old, withering bend,
a ruinous, curving blue
that is sky and sea
and also nothing, always
the same, circling like the ancient Eagle
around the fact of death.

there are people whom i love, but
such people are ideas with blurry faces,
silent reverberations of promises,
responsibilities above all
to innate, though misunderstood, goals.
about such people little new can be learned,
i think, but i write that i have traveled far
that i might see them soon.
i will see.

and this was your canada
She smiles across some time zones.
i shut off the light and through the wall
stars wink at me a billion years ago
as i put down my pen. leaning,
steadying myself on the wall i find
suddenly only air in a world of doors
that open and close themselves.

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posted by: PastorDave (reply)
post date: 02.10.06 (6:09 pm)

I am thankful life is not just a circle. I believe there is an end to life as we understand it in this realm. I look forward to a new life, a higher realm, an even better life. Next to God.



posted by: TaBooTenente (reply)
post date: 02.10.06 (6:54 pm)

but it is a strange thing, while living, to come to the end of a road. that feeling--is it nostalgia, something else?--that there is no more road, and you can't get back to where you came from.

"this is the time of tension between dying and birth /

The place of solitude where three dreams cross/"
--ts eliot "ash wednesday"

a time of tension. waiting for a door to open.

taboo




posted by: idiotbubble (reply)
post date: 02.12.06 (4:36 am)

I like that. you're a great poet! and the 'i's are cool. love it.



posted by: surrogate (reply)
post date: 02.12.06 (5:02 am)

I love the last two lines.





posted by: TaBooTenente (reply)
post date: 02.12.06 (6:11 am)

ib:

thanks. i liked your poem as well. this is an old poem, i wrote it maybe five years ago, and i started thinking about it again recently when thinking about a story i have to write for tomorrow. i realized that the story i'm writing reflects this poem's ideas--old ideas that i'd thought were forgotten.

it's strange: i've been working my arse off to isolate what i'm writing about in this story, and now i'm thinking that i've come a long way just to pick up where i left off!

taboo




posted by: TaBooTenente (reply)
post date: 02.12.06 (6:14 am)

thanks surrogate. those lines, and the line about responsibility to innate, misunderstood goals, make up the idea of nostalgia ive been thinking and writing about lately.

for some reason, it makes me happy to think that i can see the same old ideas in a new light, once in a while.

taboo




posted by: sweetsue (reply)
post date: 02.12.06 (9:19 am)

that was awesome taboo...and wow..your header..I posted that pic months back on my blog..how cool is that..lol



posted by: TaBooTenente (reply)
post date: 02.12.06 (12:11 pm)

sweet,

really? man, i stumbled on that pic during a search and i thought, hey, that's pretty original!

since then, fifty people have mentioned to me that my header looks like every poster sold at a university bookstore.

i'm always behind the times.

taboo




posted by: surrogate (reply)
post date: 02.13.06 (3:42 pm)

Reply to: TaBooTenente

I always thought that poster needed to go two steps further... back to the chimp (ape?) in the starting position.




posted by: TaBooTenente (reply)
post date: 02.13.06 (5:39 pm)

surrogate:

i don't think we've evolved that far, yet. maybe if we get a couple more cheney henchmen in the whitehouse, someone will bomb us properly and we can head back up into the trees where we belong.

taboo




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